Friday 21 May 2021

the day things started to disappear (was for a test) (Not Real)

 The Day Things Began to Disappear


Sunday night July 4th 2001

We were having a birthday dinner party for my dad, my whole family came to town to celebrate his 40th. It was a huge blast until after dinner I couldn’t find my drink. I had a Red Bull with Vodka. I was only 17 but since it was a big night for my dad he let me drink.


1 hour later


“Hey Dad, can I let my friends come over because  they want to come and have some fun with us?” I asked him really nicely.

“Sure my darling they can come over and did you find your drink?” he said to me.

“Yea it was in the bathroom and please don’t ask me why it was in there. I think someone might have thought it was their drink or I don’t know,” I said while answering his question.


I go up stairs to call my friends to tell them to come over!


When they all arrive I say “hey guys wanna anything to drink and my dad is over in the carport with his mates and my mom.”

“Oh ok that's good, can I have a Vodka and Coke?” Corey asked.

“I’ll just have a Coke please,” Ava asked. 

“Sure anything for you guys, I’ll go show you where my dad and mom are,” I told them.

 We all go outside to see my parents then we only see my mom and my dads mates but where was my dad? 

Then I went and saw that the car was gone. I go back to where my mom was sitting.

“Mom where's dad and my friends are here they will come out soon,” I asked my mom.

“To be honest darling I don’t know where your dad is. Hey boys you know where John went?” My Mom said as she asked his mates. 

But of course they all replied with no.

Then I suddenly hear a car noise. It was our family car pulling into the driveway, there was a man inside it looked like my dad. I ran over to the car and opened the driver's door and it was my dad, he only went to buy more beers.

“Dad, where were you? I was looking for you because my friends want to say hi,” I told my dad bit by bit.

My friends come outside and say Hi and happy birthday to my dad while he was getting 10 more boxes of beers out of the car.

After all that trouble we all enjoyed our night.

The End 

Happy Birthday Dad  

   


1 comment:

  1. I like your conversations between the charaters, it is quite realistic and believeable.
    I enjoyed your story and can see how the planning sheet helped you organise your ideas.

    ReplyDelete

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