I go into my room to get a board game to play with my family. I grabbed the board game and took it out to the living room. My sister and I unboxed and then I noticed that the small bag that had the pieces in were not there, then my sister ran down the hall to my bedroom and dropped down on her knees and looked under my bed, she couldn't see it so i grabbed her hair and pulled her away then I looked and I found it and as soon as I said “found it” she was there waiting for me to get up so I put the bag on my dresser and then we got into a huge scrap and of course I won like always. I went back into the living room and I opened the bag and we got the pieces out and we played a good game. My mum won and she was so happy because whenever she plays a board game with my sibling she always loses. My family is so competitive.
A good family story. If your family are any thing like you, then yes, I bet they are competitive. You have one 'run on' sentence in the middle which is hard to read because you don't give the reader any pauses. Nice ork.
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