Thursday 10 June 2021

first time using this planing sheet (Not finished yet)

 Narrative Planning Sheet

L.I. - I am learning to plan for my writing.

S. C. - Think about the beginning, middle, and end.

           Draw/brainstorm my plan


Beginning

What happens at the beginning?

Who are the main characters? 

Where is it set?

How are the characters feeling?


My toothbrush goes missing and my hairbrush

Build up

What happens next?

How does the story hint at a problem?

How are the characters feeling?


I blame my parents for taking it.

When it was my lil sister was taking my hairbrush and toothbrush for her dolls hair gel


Problem

What is the problem within the story?

How are the characters feeling?


I get grounded for blaming my parents.

Resolution

How is this problem resolved/ sorted out?

How are the characters feeling?


I found out it was my sister because I found my hairbrush in her doll's box and I found my toothbrush in her gel container.

Ending

How does the story end?

Will it end happily? 

Is there a twist to the plot?

How are the characters feeling?


I get a new toothbrush and hairbrush and then my sister got in trouble because she took my things without me knowing when she could of just asked mum to buy her some things 






“Where’s. My. Toothbrush?” I screamed.

“Why are you yelling sissy?” My sister asked with a smirk on her face.

“Where’s. My. Toothbrush little girl?” I asked in an irritated voice.

“Sissy, I'm not sure, you should go ask mommy.”

“AHHHHH, you're not any help around this damn house,” I said as angry as I could possibly be.

“MOMMY WHERE’S MY TOOTHBRUSH!” I screamed at my mom.

“Darling, Darling why are you screaming at me?” My mom asked.
“Because I can’t find my toothbrush and I think you stole it to do your

ugly makeup😡.” I said really aggressively.

“WHAT DID YOU JUST SAY TO ME YOU LITTLE BRAT😡?” Mom replied in shock but also so mad.

“What I said to you mother is that I'm blaming you for stealing my toothbrush for your ugly makeup experiments,” I replied to my grumpy mother.

“HOW DISRESPECTFUL YOUNG LADY. WHAT GIVES YOU THE RIGHT TO TALK ABOUT AND TO ME LIKE THAT. HOW STUPID OF YOU, THIS ISN’T YOUR HOUSE, SO THESE AREN’T YOUR RULES EITHER,” My mother said.

“WELL OLD LADY, I’M TELLING THE TRUTH YOUR MAKEUP EXPERIMENTS MAKE YOU LOOK UGLY, DON’T COME AT ME FOR TELLING THE TRUTH PEOPLE ALWAYS TELL ME TO TELL THE TRUTH SO YOU CAN’T COME AT ME,” I said.

When I said that I was in shock myself because I’ve never said something like that to my mom before.

  

We then stood in silence for a few seconds.

All of a sudden I ran down the hallway out of my parent's room, running to my sister's room but then I stopped… 

The door of her room was closed, I go bulging in but I couldn’t get my body in, there was my sister holding the door shut.

“Oiii let me in or I’ll tell mommy!” I said while waiting for her to open the door.

“Yea I will sissy just wait I need to do something don't come in,  just wait.”

“Sure,”  I said while rolling my eyes 






under the bed

I go into my room to get a board game to play with my family. I grabbed the board game and took it out to the living room. My sister and I u...