Who’s The Hero In Your Family?
WALT:
I elaborate on my ideas with relevant details e.g. each idea has supporting detail
I can use the 4 E’s in my writing- Evidence, Explanation, Example, Elaboration
To create a picture in the reader’s head
Mum:
Caring, Loving, Creative, Helpful, Humble, Kind.
My Mum is the most caring person I know. She always makes my family feel good about themselves and she will even make dinner after some long days. She sometimes makes my lunch, but only sometimes because I want to make it most of the days. Another way she is caring is how she always goes out and buys food for our family.
My Mum is so creative and for example, my sister and I have gotten our rooms resigned and she's been googling and helping us figure out ideas for our rooms like different shelves and more things like that. Another great example about my mum being creative is she was making flowers out of records and people were buying them off her
Thanks for Reading
The Words at the top I don't have enough time to finish but I'm gonna finish in my own time
You used the 4 E's to help you add detail about each new idea you shared. I love the way you added thoughtful examples. Good to see you using paragraphs. You need to do that to be at Level 3 and beyond.
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